Thursday, November 4, 2010

Time

A man an women were waiting  patiently at  huge San Fransico train station. They looked aged and torn down. Their "names" were George and Patricia Whalking today this would be the day they would finally settle things. The train was taking  them to  a place of where they never dreamt of returning. The child hood memories all the flash backs would be over for good. Today was the day the old couple would see life again.
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2 comments:

  1. Abby S.January 27, 2011 at 8:27 AM

    I enjoyed the way you made the train peice a mystery, and didn't really uncover what was going on. good Job! ~Sharpee

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  2. Sarah KMarch 1, 2011 at 8:57 AM

    This is good and if you compared this story to the essays you're writing now, you can see the huge improvement but this is really good. Nice describing!

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